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Space Between Your Heartbeats by ~darkangel4lyfe:icondarkangel4lyfe:



Two hands they hold a heart
They keep it safe and true
You say well maybe someday
I say I’m all for you

You wonder if the distance
Will cause my heart to stray
I wonder if the distance
Will make you fade away

Promise me you won’t forget

Those summer nights
The starry skies
The places we would go
How to hold my hand
All our future plans
Playing in the snow
Why my eyes they change
Walking in the rain
When you hold me til I calm down
I won’t ever say
There will come a day
Where the space will make my heart drown

You have everything going for you
You have the world in your hands
I know you worry about this
But it’s all part of the plan

Remember this when you’re gone

All those summer nights
The starry skies
The places we would go
How to hold my hand
All our future plans
Playing in the snow
Why my eyes they change
Walking in the rain
When you hold me til I calm down
I won’t ever say
There will come a day
Where the space will make my heart drown

Trust me to sleep alone
I know your heart is home
This might hurt me someday
But it won’t be me that strays away
Thoughts running through my head
Memories follow me to bed
Stakes are high i'll make a bet
I never will forget

Those summer nights
The starry skies
The places we would go
How to hold my hand
All our future plans
Playing in the snow
Why my eyes they change
Walking in the rain
When you hold me til I calm down
I won’t ever say
There will come a day
Where the space will make my heart drown
Don’t let me down
©2008-2009 ~darkangel4lyfe
:icondarkangel4lyfe:

Author's Comments

I couldn't get this quite right...
I don't want to be repetitive with the pieces I write, so I try to take it from a different time or perspecitve
But lately it comes back to this though/feeling

:/

Damn the future

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:iconohmyxmurder:
Everything will all work out.
Eventually.
Damn, that's such a hard concept to grasp.
:iconfrazzled-mage:
I know you keep finding yourself here recently. But I am a fan of this style of work by you. You ellicit a desire in the reader to understand the worth and the part that destiny/fate/serendipity plays in this whole process.

Two lines in particular caught my eye because I know the answer:

I wonder if the distance
Will make you fade away

Neither time nor distance can make love of the strength you speak of fade. In fact years later though choices made have led me to different places, it still feels the same.

Thank you for sharing this piece.

jfk

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:iconchattycat28:
I love this piece. All of it is good, but these lines are my favorite.

Thoughts running through my head
Memories follow me to bed
Stakes are high i'll make a bet
I never will forget

You will win that bet

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